Feedback
After completing our first draft we received feed back from Mrs Dughan. We received feedback from the rest of our As media class as we sat down and watched everyone's thriller videos and having to write down 4 point of constructive criticism. From the feedback from these two sources we found that the major points which needed to be changed were:
- Not enough variety of shots were used this made it lack tension and narrative enigma
- The initial titles didn't read well or seem professional enough
- Some of the secondary titles were hard to read
- Some shots were blurry
- Moments lacked precision with the white balance
- The heart beat sound lost the effect that we wanted
From the feedback that we were given we decided that the best course of action would be to re-shoot and re-edit our Thriller in order to reach the highest grade possible.We planned to re-shoot a larger variety of different shot types and to have the actor doing a bit more than just skipping to add more tension and make the opening sequence less boring.
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